Tuesday, March 2, 2010

Areas for Improvement Question

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7 comments:

  1. LilyWMarch 4, 2010 at 7:54 AM

    I think that all that you need to improve is that maybe you could have more information about his childhood. Also there is a typo I spotted: In 1764 he married Abigail Smith, She “intelligent, vivacious, and warm.”
    It should be 'She is', not just 'she'
    Other than that this blog is the bomb!

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  2. AllyssaDMarch 4, 2010 at 7:56 AM

    You had alot of info but I agree with Lily. I think you could have had a little more info about his childhood. But it was a great blog!

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  3. ElizabethNMarch 4, 2010 at 12:05 PM

    I think you had good information but I also agree with Allysa and Lily

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  4. tvanpelt0820March 4, 2010 at 2:45 PM

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  5. tvanpelt0820March 4, 2010 at 2:48 PM

    I do not think that this blog needs to be improved too much. Perhaps you could have had more color variation but I suppose it looks fine how it is now.

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  6. BaileyRMarch 8, 2010 at 5:37 PM

    you did a great job but you forgot the two visitor respose questions at the end.

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  7. BaileyRMarch 8, 2010 at 5:39 PM

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